Introduction (p. 9-12)
“For Ronnie, social network sites are intricately woven into
the tapestry of his daily literacy practices; they play a large role in how he
interacts with others in his personal and professional life as well as how he
presents himself to different audiences.”
This
statement introduces the idea of social media and the way it interacts with
Ronnie’s everyday life and to exactly how many different areas of his life are
impacted by what he does online. This is an important fact to orient the reader
to what is to come.
“’web based services that allow individuals to (1) construct
a public or semi-public profile within a bounded system, (2) articulate a list
of other users with whom they share a connection and (3) view and traverse
their list of connections and those made by others within the system”
I think
this quote outlines the purpose of social media, once again providing context
and structure for the reader to work within, enabling them to better understand
and engage with the specific case sensitive information provided later in the
paper.
Methods (p. 12-13)
“The information discussed in the profile tour gave me an
overall sense of how Ronnie perceived his own identity representation online,
some history behind that representation, and his perspective on what those
representations meant to him.”
In this
sentence Buck explains not only what methods she used for collecting data but
why she chose that method and the type of information it allowed her to gather.
“Through the time-use diary, I was able to track literate
activity as it was embedded within Ronnie’s daily use of social network sites.”
This
statement allows readers to understand what this particular method allowed her
to gather and how this information was used.
Results (p. 13-30)
“Ronnie updated Facebook with content that he felt would be
more appropriate for his wider audience. He would update Facebook with progress
on for example, his graduate school applications, like this update from
December 6, 2010:”
This quote
leads into a direct post from Ronnie’s Facebook which engages the reader in
actual content from his profile but also goes beyond the post itself and addresses
the audience that the post is intended to reach and why he chose to post that
particular update. This is different than the discussion but still gives detail
and content to the section.
“As noted above, Ronnie frequently set up an account on a
social network site when it launched in order to ‘claim real estate’ on the
site in case it became more popular; for this reason, he started his Twitter
account along with accounts on other social network sites. “
This
piece does a good job outlining the reasoning behind why the participant has
the social media site but leaves more to be discussed in depth in the discussion
session.
Discussion (p. 30-34)
“As an expert user, Ronnie saw himself in a place to both
distinguish himself from his other Facebook friends and to make a statement
about the ways that his friends use Facebook and others’ information on the
site.”
This
goes into greater detail on why he set up so many social media accounts and
starts to draw more conclusions on what this means for how he represents
himself online.
“Ronnie declined to fill these sections out, finding these
boxes too limiting to explain, for example, his musical tastes.”
By
addressing what he declines to fill out, the author is still able to draw on
how Ronnie chooses to create himself online.